Fic: Say the Magic Word (comment)
Feb. 24th, 2010 09:48 amTitle: Say the Magic Word
Prompt: DCU, Tim/Zatara, Bibbity-Bobbity-Boo
Rating: NC-17 for hard smut
Disclaimer: All fun, no cash.
Author’s notes: 100% organic. May contain minor flaws and imperfections that beta-treated slash wouldn’t.
Summary: Written for
darthbatgirl’s prompt here but reposted to share. (Mostly from Just!)
“What’s the magic word Tim?” Zat demanded smugly, watching his lover struggle under the magical bonds.
“Enough Zat.” Tim growled, pulling restlessly at the ties that held his wrist and ankles. He’s been hard for what seemed like hours now and the tight leather cock-ring was past the point of being fun. “Either let me up or finish me off.”
“Not until you say the magic word.”
“My boyfriend’s an asshole?” Tim growled sarcastically, panting as Zat’s silken scarf trailed over his skin.
“Not even close.” Zat grinned, loving the shudder that shot though Tim’s frame.
“Abracadabra?”
“Nope.”
“Hocus Pocus?”
“Nope.”
“Open sesame.”
“You wish.”
“Hey presto.”
‘You’re stretching now Tim.”
“Expelliarmus. A la peanut butter sandwiches. Bibbity-Bobbity-fucking Boo.” Tim gasped, his limbs strained, his chest tight as Zat settled between his knees, teased a finger over his shaft. “Enough!”
“Then say it.” Zat whispered, blowing cool air over the head of Tim’s cock. “Say the magic word.”
“PLEASE!”
Zat opened the cock-ring with a flick of his wrist, swallowing Tim whole as the youth shuddered and screamed his long denied release. “See,” he whispered as he licked his lips, chasing the last flecks of Tim’s taste. “It wasn’t that hard to say was it?”
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Date: 2010-02-23 11:11 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2010-02-23 11:24 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2010-02-24 11:51 am (UTC)You need to inform me straight away when you write Zat/Tim porn. I really do need some sort of alert system for Zat/Tim fic.
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Date: 2010-02-24 12:07 pm (UTC)Hehehe. That's why I re-posted it here rather than letting it get lost in the mishmash of comment_fic. Next time I'll light up the Zat-signal!
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Date: 2010-02-24 12:09 pm (UTC)I went to O-Week today! It was pretty interesting! The Union is really expensive and joining clubs/societies is expensive and I am going to do all that after my trip to Melbourne.
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Date: 2010-02-24 12:17 pm (UTC)The union at my uni is stupidly cheap and so worth it for the bank of free computers no-one seems to know about and the cheap printing. The library computers are always busy and you have to hover over someone’s shoulder till they go away top get one.
How are you feeling about your Melbourne trip? Has your friend sorted herself out yet?
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Date: 2010-02-24 12:31 pm (UTC)No she didn't. I sorted myself out. I'm flying down Friday morning, staying in a hotel friday night, and flying home saturday arvo.
Best karma ever though. My friend missed her flight and because it's a cheapy airline, couldn't get it rescheduled and had to give up that ticket and buy a new one. So she's out the same amount of money I am for place tickets. Which is really quite hilarious.
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Date: 2010-02-24 12:48 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2010-02-24 12:49 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2010-03-05 11:25 am (UTC)Mmm, Zat is such an evil little bastard. This was delicious. More Tim bondage is definitely needed.
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Date: 2010-03-05 11:52 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2010-03-05 12:20 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2010-03-05 12:28 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2010-03-05 02:47 pm (UTC)maybe repeatedly.