Oh, yay for Bruce being the caring, attentive person we all know he is (just rarely shown to be, grrr)!!
This was so wonderful, my dear. You captured and conveyed Tim's fears and panic so well, that my heart ached for him. But equally great was Bruce's caring for Tim in his time of need. I loved how naturally it progressed to the kiss, and the ending was just perfect.
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Date: 2010-09-18 11:36 am (UTC)This was so wonderful, my dear. You captured and conveyed Tim's fears and panic so well, that my heart ached for him. But equally great was Bruce's caring for Tim in his time of need. I loved how naturally it progressed to the kiss, and the ending was just perfect.
Great job!